Hide and Seek Part 2 – Prompt – August 10th, 2015


Finish the story begins with:  “Where did they go?”

These is actually part 2 of Hide and Seek. You can read part 1 here.


“Where did they go?

Jenny looked to John Barker, the cowboy. This was all his fault. He distracted her and the boys disappeared again.

“Look Jenny, they can’t have gone far. Wait here and I will ride over to the ruins just in case they got curious and went in and got lost.” John got to the old ruins on the other side of the property. He dismounted and disappeared inside one of the openings.

She watched John lead the boys out of the ruin and put them both on his horse and led them back. “They were lost in there! I doubt they will do that again.”

“Don’t you ever do that again! No more hide and seek.”

“We’re sorry!”

“John, I have to get these two home and cleaned up before their parents arrive home or I just might be a nanny without a job.”


Advocate for mental health and invisible illnesses, also a devout Christian

Author – http://www.finallyawriter.com (this blog contains my old work mostly although occasionally I do add something new here), new work is mainly on this blog http://www.tessacandoit.com

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